Steven has a good format that can carry through the semester.
Matt has a good narrative. The parts about project direction should be more direct. Replace "should" with "will" or "must".
Jen has good notes. They are accompanied by sketches that are corresponding in idea and content. The format should be better starting now.
Dennis now has a clear direction. Start making! Be forceful in your attitude towards the towns proposal. It needs serious help.
I'm sure everyone else will have pages posted by the end of class today.
Robert Cody
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