Matt - The statement is better. I think it could use a final edit, but save that for later. It does a good job as is explaining the concepts and needs of and for the project. What's still unclear is how to do it. Concept - great. Program - great. Site - great. Process - not so great. I know it took a good deal of research and mental effort to get to this point, but you need to develop a group of schemes that really discuss the living and working aspects of the dwelling and production spaces and how they interact or not interact with the public spaces, in particular the market. Its a nice project, but it can fall flat without a serious effort to distill what is needed and what's not. I still believe this project is less about what to build, its really about what not to build.
Robert Cody
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