Friday, September 25, 2009

Thesis Statement: First Draft

Patch Adams once said that "the health of an individual is linked of that individual's family, community, and society." The wellness of oneself is mostly dependent on the lifestlye of choice. By creating a community that accepts everyone for who they are, it encourages a better lifestyle towards a maximum well-being. If the community can learn to grow and listen to the needs of one another, the wellness center can care for those whom need the attention and medical care.

Concerns:
  • I would like to somehow input the positive lifestyle influence that the community center could have
  • somewhere input a community center
  • I would like to install the idea of how the sustainability of the building is "helping" the earth, the doctors are helping the people, and the people are helping each other.....

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